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Philosophy in the BathroomThey sat across the table from each other, her steely blue eyes piercing into him as he looked sheepishly away, avoiding her gaze. The scent of cheap tobacco, mixed with the chocolate chip cookies in the oven, lingered in the air.   “You really should buy a new suit, dear,” She said, lifting the cigarette to her ruby red lips, exhaling the smoke in a dragged-out sigh.   He shook his head, coughing into his closed fist as the smoke tickled his nostrils. “Would you please put that thing out?”   She smirked at him, taking another drag of her smoke. “No.” She leaned across the table and Philosophy in the Bathroom
by ~GossamerInnocence
I've Lost a MiracleIf you make me answer  I swear to god I'll swallow you whole  If you take this ransom  I'll never let you go  For the first time I've been able to fold  This fragile place  Where four walls become a home  Boundries and strife, boundries and bloody things  Unnamed and undirected  Only where hand meets wrist  Can we feel born again  And that guilty smile that rolls across your face  Keeps on rolling and rips holes in empty space  Captivated, capacitated, bound to your dreams  Like stars in retrograde  I'll come back for you I've Lost a Miracle
by ~Synthetic-MilkMan
Defending HopeDefending Hope       Ever since she was born, Hope had been frail. She was a premature delivery, thirty two weeks. An ugly little thing in my eyes: squishy, pink, and bald, but Mama and Papa smiled down at her like she was the prettiest thing they had ever seen. They didn’t even seem to mind her screaming.       Later on, mama told me that when /I/ was born, I had cried a lot louder. She said Hope had been quieter than most babies. I asked her why, and she said it was because Hope had been born with a terrible pneumonia. I didn’t bother to ask what a pneumonia was, because Defending Hope
by ~MyMidnightLove
LullabyA song of childhood fancy,  Whispered late at night,  A testament to truth and love,  To chase away the fright.   
How long ago it came to me;  A time when I was free.  But I can’t go back to the lullaby;  I forgot the words you see. Lullaby
by ~worldwalker
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IMPORTANT DATES

Fri Mar 14, 2008, 3:24 PM
THE CLUB IS TEMPORARILY CLOSED, AS I UNFORTUNATELY AM TOO BUSY TO RUN IT. IF SOMEONE WOULD BE INTERESTED IN RUNNING IT IN MY ABSENCE OR EVEN JUST LENDING ME A HAND, HOPEFULLY WE'LL BE ABLE TO BRING IT BACK, THANK YOU.

THIRD ASSIGNMENT DUE DATE

The second assignment will be due Wednesday, February 27th. Got it memorized?

Anyway, write something, upload it to dA, then send the club a note with the name of the piece, a link to it, and any additional info you'd like whoever it gets assigned to to know. Thanks!!!


CRITIQUING DETAILS
So, the assignment date has come and gone, pieces have been passed in, and I'd like to thank every member of the club profusely for making this run smoothly. If you have any comments or questions or suggestions, comment this journal or note the club, and I'll be sure to get back to you.

Also, when you've finished critiquing a piece, send a critiqued copy or e-mail it to the author.

AUTHORS, ONCE YOU RECEIVE THIS, PLEASE, IF YOU EDIT YOUR DA VERSION, NOTE ME WITH A LINK SO THAT I CAN UPLOAD A LINK TO THIS JOURNAL! THANK YOU!

And with the passing of the due date for the assignment comes the critiquing portion of the club.

Every member who turned in a piece will be noted with the name and link to another.

Please work out details of editing with the author of your assigned piece. Whether you want to copy it into Word or another typing processor and then e-mail it to keep formatting of just toss your edits into a note is completely up to the two of you. Again, any questions can be sent to me in a note. Thank you all very much!!

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*owel Feb 9, 2008, 6:01:06 AM
thank u so much for the fav :aww::heart:

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Mood: Sociable *Adopt-A-Writer Feb 3, 2008, 3:14:45 PM
Thanks for affliating, and welcome to DA!

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~Hotaru-ai Feb 2, 2008, 7:17:06 PM
i'm too damn lazy to send a note. i'm here.

uh... i'll attempt to spread the word.

you got us a dAmn chat?
post the link. (or gimme the pass for this name and i can collect bits a piece of information yeah?)

off to spread the word.

:damphyr:

hm... i feel like applesause right now... = =

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but that's no excuse to miss the bus.
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~LiTrade Feb 4, 2008, 1:50:08 PM
Well there's this one in the projects forum : [link]

And this one in the literature workshop : [link]

-applause- !!!

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